深度解析2021年英语一大作文

2021-01-04 09:46:00

  2021届考研英语已落下帷幕,今年英语一大作文部分仍然沿用传统的人生哲理方面的单图题,就其难度而言,与2019年的人生哲理题基本一致,其图如下:

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  同历年真题相比较,本年度考查的单图题与2019年的“途中”有异曲同工之处,都是一个人物对另一个人物的劝导和启迪,均可归类到人生哲理的正向主题之列,在海文考研的暑期强化班及专项提高中所讲的素材均可以使用,考生只需要变换主题词即可。

  一、审题与立意:

  按照我们在强化班上所讲述的审题步骤,考生可先看文字,再分析图片,图片中的文字表明本文论述的对象应为“爱好”,再看图片,理清其中的人物和发出的动作:左边是一穿着演出服装(costume)、手拿一根长棍(stick)的儿童(kid),站在自己父亲跟前问到“爸爸,好多同学觉得唱戏不好玩”;右边中的这位父亲,面带微笑,说到“你自己不是喜欢吗?那就足够了”。这种审题的方式直接决定第一段的描图语句。然后,由图画得知,本文需要论述“爱好”的重要性,同时将文章的孩子上升到天下的年轻人,父亲的话语提升为“根据爱好选择自己的学习、成长及事业等方向”,从而得出正向主题,此时,第二段、第三段的论述素材便一气呵成。

  二、各段布局:

  按照我们的整体布局,第一段需要简要描述图画,略微引向主题,由整体描图、细节描图、升华主题而成。第二段的论述意在点名图片寓意,具体阐释论证,可在揭示本文主题之后,具体阐释根据爱好决定学习的意义。第三段根据上文论点,具体阐释态度决心和对策。

  三、范文:

  As is distinctively depicted in the illustrating cartoon, a father is answering his child’s question. The kid, wearing beautiful costumes and holding a long stick, tells his father that many of his classmates feel tired of learning to act in an opera. And his father takes the attitude that he can learn it since he likes it. It is obvious that the kid can choose what he learns according to his hobby and interest.

  What a wise man once put happens to be the implication of the cartoon: making efforts according to your hobbies and interests can make remarkable success. In other words, the industrious and insightful individual will never fail to stress the fundamental role of interests when choosing career. This can be exemplified by the case of Elon Musk. As the president of the Space X and Tesla, he is convinced that it is his interest to explore the deep space that significantly contributes to his present achievement, making it easier for him to survive in this competitive commercial world. No wonder the author intends to warn us to choose our career and make efforts based on our hobbies.

  I used to wonder and ponder whether I could make decisions based on my interest. With the enlightenment from the picture, I am determined to spare no efforts to stick to this principle without any hesitation. Therefore, with the good fortune from my interest, I can proceed more smoothly and realize my dreams more rapidly.

  四、启示

  仔细审视这篇文章,考生可以发现,本篇素材可以完全应用到2019年坚持,2018年创新,2017年 读书及2016年树立榜样上。这也表明,考生对作文的复习一定坚持两点,一是紧跟海文考研老师的素材,做到熟练背诵,在考场上微观调整;二是坚持写完近十年真题,真题是我们备考的最可信的依据。最后预祝2022届考生圆满成功。